Re: Eh...
The only PoV changes ever in any of the Iron Hand stories were in the original story of Iron Hand, and only chapters 10 [Zach's PoV] and 11 [Jett's PoV]. Both were relatively easy to figure out and only two people, including yourself, have ever given me negative feedback on it.
However, feedback is what I ask for, so thanks for commenting. ^_^
The purpose of the PoV change was to give better insight to the characters, and I was told by many a person that those two chapters provided just that.
However, I do understand where you're coming from in saying that the PoV change was somewhat confusing, so please don't think I'm sitting here attacking your opinion. ^_^; It's one of the main reasons why I haven't changed PoVs in any of the other stories I've written, so I *have* taken it into consideration.
If anything I've said in the above paragraphs comes across as snappy, please accept my apologies. It wasn't my intention to come across that way.
Thanks again for taking the time to read my work and comment on it! I appreciate and look forward to more feedback from you.