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Tyger (tygermizu) wrote,
@ 2004-01-04 18:22:00

Current mood:	blah
Current music:	Missing Heart - Moonlight Shadow (Full Version)

Chapters 5 and 6 of Law and Order have been completed. Unfortunately, they desperately needed to undergo some serious editing [Chapter 5 more so than Chapter 6], and I'm awaiting their completion before I post them. Chapter 7 started off without a hitch, but I've now hit a brick wall. x_x; I need to come up with some sort of an idea...

...how about switching Point of View and writing from first person? I could write one chapter from André's PoV, and then the following chapter could be from Kevin's. I did it in Iron Hand, but one of my most trusted friends wasn't fond of the random and sudden change in PoV. -_-;; I guess hitting brick walls in writing isn't common for her...

In other news, I go back to school tomorrow, mid-terms start on the 16th, and since I'm moving and much packing needs to be done, I don't know how much time I'll have, if any, for writing. Between studying, packing and trying to make some last-minute memories with my friends, I think I'll be quite busy. However, the move itself shouldn't take too long, so I should be back to writing quickly. It'll be a nice escape from the fact that I'm in a new school and practically all alone.

Well, I think that's about it for now. My friend Kyle has been giving me daily writing assignments and I have one due in about...two and a half hours. Better get crackin'!

>-_-<
Tyger

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Re: Eh...

tygermizu
2004-01-08 10:37 pm UTC (link)

The only PoV changes ever in any of the Iron Hand stories were in the original story of Iron Hand, and only chapters 10 [Zach's PoV] and 11 [Jett's PoV]. Both were relatively easy to figure out and only two people, including yourself, have ever given me negative feedback on it.

However, feedback is what I ask for, so thanks for commenting. ^_^

The purpose of the PoV change was to give better insight to the characters, and I was told by many a person that those two chapters provided just that.

However, I do understand where you're coming from in saying that the PoV change was somewhat confusing, so please don't think I'm sitting here attacking your opinion. ^_^; It's one of the main reasons why I haven't changed PoVs in any of the other stories I've written, so I *have* taken it into consideration.

If anything I've said in the above paragraphs comes across as snappy, please accept my apologies. It wasn't my intention to come across that way.

Thanks again for taking the time to read my work and comment on it! I appreciate and look forward to more feedback from you.

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